Florida. My destination, before the tragedy. The thoughts of heat and theme parks filled me up with a bubbling sense of joy. I was on the plane when the incident happened; all was fine, it was a nice and smooth flight, then I looked out of the plane window, to see a monstrous capsule of death hurtling towards the plane with immense speed. “My time is up. Goodbye world. I won’t be here in a matter of seconds.” I closed my eyes, waiting for death to swallow me up, to wipe me from the memory of the World. I’m gone.
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I did this on my blog. enjoy!
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Yes Ben I really enjoyed reading this.
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What a fabulous pice of writing. A fantastic array of punctuation used, even speech correctly punctuated – well done. I loved the varying sentence lengths for dramatic effect too! I look forward to reading more on your blog!
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Thank you so much!
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